I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Kaycee it's Chrysler here. I like how you got lots of work done. Also I like the way that you have got the whole story basicly.Maybe next time you could put in some pictures or videos you know what I mean right.Pictures from the trip or something or a couple of videos something like that.
Hi Kaycee it's Safiyya. I like how have lots of information. Also I like the way that you have got the whole story basically.Maybe next time you could put in some pictures or videos of Australia. Maybe pictures from the trip or something. Thank you for taking your time to look at this comment.
Hello Its Noah from Gilberthorpe school Christchurch. I like how you have planned out your slide. I also like the facts you put in. I think your next step is to write more. Bye blogya later ka pai.
kia it Gemeve I like the way you put blots of information about australia did you think about spalling I did the same thing about australia why did you do it with aliyah?
Hello kaycee it olivia for manawaroa and l like that you got the big pop in it azming and it is pop of colors and it cool l like too pink and the and the more colors in it now you can do good at some time and can get to a like it too you are going good bye good and l can get the australia and l was got in it l like it too.
kia ora kaycee i think that you and aliyah worked really hard and you added alot of information that people need to know what to bring and what the weather
Kia ora Kaycee! Zoey here. I think that you guys worked really hard but there is a mistake in the slide after the title slide. It says on the second line that there is a population of 24.6 million people. Then on the last line it says there is a population of 24.77 million people. Other than that I think it was an amazing slide! Blog you later!
Hi, it's Hunter. I like this post because it is on a really cool country. This reminds me of the last time I went to Australia. There is a mistake on the third slide. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
Hi it's Kevin that's cool that you went to australia and you brought facts from australia back maybe next time you could tell us more. Blog Ya Later (:
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Kaycee it's Chrysler here. I like how you got lots of work done. Also I like the way that you have got the whole story basicly.Maybe next time you could put in some pictures or videos you know what I mean right.Pictures from the trip or something or a couple of videos something like that.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaycee it's Safiyya.
ReplyDeleteI like how have lots of information. Also I like the way that you have got the whole story basically.Maybe next time you could put in some pictures or videos of Australia. Maybe pictures from the trip or something.
Thank you for taking your time to look at this comment.
Hello Its Noah from Gilberthorpe school Christchurch. I like how you have planned out your slide. I also like the facts you put in. I think your next step is to write more. Bye blogya later ka pai.
ReplyDeletekia it Gemeve
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put blots of information about australia
did you think about spalling I did the same thing about australia
why did you do it with aliyah?
ReplyDeleteHello kaycee it olivia for manawaroa and l like that you got the big pop in it azming and it is pop of colors and it cool l like too pink and the and the more colors in it now you can do good at some time and can get to a like it too you are going good bye good and l can get the australia and l was got in it l like it too.
kia ora kaycee i think that you and aliyah worked really hard and you added alot of information that people need to know what to bring and what the weather
ReplyDeleteKia ora Kaycee! Zoey here.
ReplyDeleteI think that you guys worked really hard but there is a mistake in the slide after the title slide. It says on the second line that there is a population of 24.6 million people. Then on the last line it says there is a population of 24.77 million people. Other than that I think it was an amazing slide!
Blog you later!
(Try and post more often to please.)
Deletehey it is benaiah i like the way you pot all the facts and you brought me back to when we all did it how did you make it so cool
ReplyDeleteHi, it's Hunter. I like this post because it is on a really cool country. This reminds me of the last time I went to Australia. There is a mistake on the third slide. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi it's Kevin that's cool that you went to australia and you brought facts from australia back maybe next time you could tell us more.
ReplyDeleteBlog Ya Later (: