I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora kaycee it is Lacie & Cayleigh here good job on this but we only have 2 bunnies because one died . I like the way you done your slide it is amazing because it has information. why do you like putting stuff on your blog.
Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I like the way you have told us about yourself and what you like! but you could do some more writing about yourself like your favorite food and fav colors.How much Sisters do you haven that you play with?? from - Milla.
hi kian here i like your blog but maybe if you could just explain what you did in this slide and maybe you could show me more of your work and one question what was your goal about
Hi kaycee it is me Addison & Kirsty I like this slide but you need to remember your capitals and full stops. Try to get a good smile on BLOG YOU LATER.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Kaycee i think that slide was really cool and i think next time you should check your spelling but otherwise that was really cool
ReplyDeleteHi Kaycee Jesse here. This looks cool but all your I need to be capitals and you never play with your sisters. BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteya she never plays with me
DeleteKia ora kaycee it is Lacie & Cayleigh here good job on this but we only have 2 bunnies because one died . I like the way you done your slide it is amazing because it has information. why do you like putting stuff on your blog.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I like the way you have told us about yourself and what you like! but you could do some more writing about yourself like your favorite food and fav colors.How much Sisters do you haven that you play with?? from - Milla.
ReplyDeletehi kian here i like your blog but maybe if you could just explain what you did in this slide and maybe you could show me more of your work
ReplyDeleteand one question what was your goal about
hi it is Te mihaea and Brodie i like your blog you could but bigger words why did you but it this up on your blog?.
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ReplyDeletehi it's Jonte here i would like to say that i like your help full silde by
ReplyDeleteHi kaycee it is me Addison & Kirsty I like this slide but you need to remember your capitals and full stops. Try to get a good smile on BLOG YOU LATER.
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