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Wednesday, 28 February 2018

a puppy

yesterday i was playing with a puppy next door she is mt friend the next door she had a dog and we played lots of games  and then she had to go and have dinner and we were still playing with the dog then it was her bedtime and the dog had to go home and then we went home and then we had dinner and went on the chromebooks and we had a good dinner and we loved the dinner and then we went and done the lawns and then i did not finish them so i will do them today  and then i will get to go to my mailbox and then lay in  bed for 2 hours ...

2 comments:

  1. Hey Kaycee,
    Wow what an awesome day you had! I really like the way that you have shared what you did through a recount. I am wondering what kind of puppy it is and what is it's name?
    Look forward to hearing from you!
    - Miss Morgan

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  2. Hi kaycee nice job on this maybe next time just make the words a little bit bigger apart from that it is ok.

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