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Thursday, 21 September 2017

The teddy's get stuck in the tree's

Bacon and Tim are at Bacon’s. house outside.They are playing with their teddies outside. But Tim threw his teddy in the tree He cried so much He made a flood. Then Bacon threw His teddy in the tree. He cried and made a flood as well. Then Bacon,s Mum yelled out lunch time. So they went inside.They said to Bacon’s Mum “my teddy is in the tree”and mine”said Tim Then Mum went and  had a look.
I well get them down ok ?
“Got one”
“And got two.”
“I am coming now”
“Here you go”
“Thank you so much” said Bacon and Tim”

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