I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today in writing we were doing Haiku a Haiku is a simile with 5 and 7 simile we had t write it about polar bears. The hard part was getting the sentences. The easy part writing them in.
Hi Kaycee its me RJ from southhornby school I like how you use describing words and use these adorable pictures of polar bears you could work on your font and try to make it 18 or 20 it is still the best work ever
Hi Kaycee its me Kaisa, I like how you described your haiku polar bear and I also like how you used describing words as well, I also like the adorable photo of the haiku polar bear. from Kaisa
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hi kc i like your haiku i think you have done a good job
ReplyDeleteHi Kaycee its me RJ from southhornby school I like how you use describing words and use these adorable pictures of polar bears you could work on your font and try to make it 18 or 20 it is still the best work ever
ReplyDeleteHi Kaycee its me Kaisa, I like how you described your haiku polar bear and I also like how you used describing words as well, I also like the adorable photo of the haiku polar bear.
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Hi Kaycee. Great work. You have done a good job working out the right number of syllables for each line to describe a polar bear.
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