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Friday, 9 August 2019

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This week we have been learning about  Earthquakes and I have been doing lots of work to show yours so I goona show you what I did.

First, we got told what we were learning about and we were learning about Earthquakes then we had to go away and start doing it then We had to get on with it.


Next, then we had to research what we haven't already known then we put all the information that we did know in our DLO then we added more and more information.

Lastly, we had to finish it off and then put it on our blog and then tell you.




13 comments:

  1. hi kaycee i like what you don't about earthquakes for litorice

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    1. Hey Maddock its Kaycee! Thank you for giving me so Feedback I really like what I did in Literacy
      Blog you later

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  2. Hi Kaycee! i like your post! but... maybe can you make the words bigger? i can't read them.. other then that it's awesome!

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    1. Hey Soheilla its Kaycee
      Thank you for the Feedback I really like it when people give me feedback because then I know what to do next time also I look at then I said heaps of people are gonna say that
      BLog you later

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  3. Hi Kaycee,
    it's me bea and i like your blog from literacy and it's amazing and good luck for your work:)

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    1. Hye bea its Kaycee
      Thanks for the Feedback I like it when people give me Feedback it helps me alot because then i know what to do next time and Thanks I really like it
      Blog you later. -Kaycee

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  4. hi kaycee, i like how you make you make your earthquakes and it is so interesting. i really like how you do the 5 tips about earthquake and it is awesome. bye

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  5. Hi Kaycee It's Hakeem And I Like How You Did It On Venngage So Cool. Maybe Next Time You Could Make A Slide About Your Life. Bye.

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  6. Hey Kaycee, It's Kirsty. I really like this blog post because it helps people with earthquakes. You brought me back to when the 2011 earthquakes happend. To improve, you could add some photos of an earthquake.

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  7. Hey it is Marsali that is so faceanating to now you are great at talking about earthquakes. How come you just took a screen shot you could do more writing if it is ok .bye Marsali

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  8. Kia Ora Kaycee it is Trinity and Lacie.
    We like your blog post about earthquakes. We like all the facts you added on. You did really good. Maybe next time you could add your next step.

    Blog you later.

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  9. Talofa Kaycee I'm Basty, Cool what a nice facts because if there is a real earthquake maybe you could use it to be safe. Bye

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  10. Kia ora Kaycee.
    I love the explanation you have written to tell your audience about what you had to do for this learning task. Your Venngage has some good information. My favourite part was when you said we had to just get on with it. That made me smile to myself. Thanks for sharing and good work with your blog post.

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